雅思part2口语2021真题 2021年6月2日雅思写作真题解析

对于雅思写作考试来说，多看优秀的范文，琢磨别人的写作方式，是提升自己的写作水平的一个方法，那么下面就和的我来看看2021年6月2日雅思写作真题解析。

雅思小作文范文解析：

地图描述的是十年之间一个博物馆的布局的变化，首先要注意的这个图中应该统一使用过去式，同时在描述的时候可以简单的分为三个部分进行描述：左侧，中部和右侧。按照5段的结构进行描述比较不会混乱，同时要着重的突出变化的描述，使用相关的衔接词汇进行前后的对比。

雅思小作文高分表达

renovation of a museum addition of extra facilities

gave way to is arranged as

newly established transformed to

fully take advantage of serving different purposes

left wing relocated

雅思小作文范文

The pair of maps reveals the changes in the renovation of a museum in terms of room distributions and addition of extra facilities during a 10-year period （1998-2008）.

In 1998， on the left wing of the museum， permanent and temporary rooms occupied this area. Tem year later， the temporary rooms is relocated backward which gave way to the construction of a coat room and a shop， used to be on the left front side of museum. In addition， a part of the permanent rooms is arranged as a restaurant.

In the middle part， there was an exit， a garden and a café in order. However， some fountains were newly established in the garden and also the area of the café shrank and a washroom was built.

Turning to the right side of the museum， a shop， washroom and coat room was in the front， while In 2008， they were all transformed to be permanent rooms.

Overall， the space of this museum is more fully take advantage of than before with more amenities， better serving different purposes.（范文原创自小站老师Jeff. Lei）字数 176 words

雅思写作大作文真题：Many people prefer to communicate with their online friends than to socialize with people in their local communities. Do you think it has more advantages than disadvantages？

雅思写作大作文解析：本题讨论人们更喜欢网交流而不是面对面交流的益处是否大于弊端。题目类型是议论文的一种观点类题目，题目问问法是Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages类型，可以采用5段式作文结构。

雅思文章结构

P1：引入话题+表明观点（否定观点）

P2：指出此做法的的优势：可以一定程度上帮助人们释放压力；

P3：指出此做法的弊端：对人们的心理健康有害；

P4：指出此做法的弊端：降低工作和学习效率。

P5：总结：概括文章内容和重申观点。

雅思写作高分表达

Indulge in 沉溺于

Daily routine 日常生活

Under intense pressure 压力很大

In this case 在这种情况下

Vulnerable 脆弱的

real-world problems 现实世界问题

Take a heavy toll on 对...有负面影响

Distraction 分心的事物

Put simply 简单来说

Be addicted to 沉溺于

雅思写作高分结构

No matter how 让步状语从句

It is a fact that .... and that... 同位语从句

... 平行结构

Release and reduce 押头韵

......， an unhealthy lifestyle that 概括性同位语

Never will this be 部分倒装结构表达强调

雅思写作范文

Indulging in the social networks to chat with online friends，compared with face-to-face communication， seems to become a daily routine for almost all people， no matter how old they are. But this preference is more detrimental to people involved.

Communicating with online friends appears to be a much easier and more acceptable way to relieve stress. It is fact that people， including working *s and students， are under intense pressure from work， study， and emotional life， and that they are reluctant or unwilling to share their life with friends and neighbours in the real-world for different reasons. In this case， the sharing of a tough point or some bad experiences， such as conflicts between colleagues ， the complaints of the work， or peer pressure is a seemingly strange yet safer way to release and reduce the pressure that can hardly be shared with best friends and people in their local community.

However， staying in touch with online friends will make people more emotionally vulnerable than traditional communication do. All people indeed do not live in a virtual world but are surrounded with people like family members， colleagues and neighbour in this physical world. If always chatting with a stranger online， they will spend less time with those real people who are important for them and who will help them when they are helpless with read-world problems， an unhealthy lifestyle that is more likely to result in such emotional illness as isolation ， depression， and even auti*.

This preference also takes a heavy toll on employees’ productivity and students’ academic performance. Using the Internet to work and study is as normal as having a breakfast these days. Under this circumstance， either workers or students while working or studying are easily to stay active on social networks rather on focus on their job or study，and it is a dangerous distraction to decrease work and study efficiency. Put simply， this habit that people are addicted to online conversation， instead of talking with real people ，is more time-wasting than productive and efficient.

In conclusion， feasible as it is in the stress reduction， giving preference to virtual communication rather than socialising with real people in the real world does harm to the emotional health of people and the improvement of work or study efficiency and never will this be beneficial to people in the long term.（字数 336words）

对于写作而言，了解高分作文的写作思维逻辑以及用词，对于自己写作的改进也是很有帮助的，下面就和的我来看看2021年5月19日雅思写作真题范文。

2021年5月19日的雅思写作真题：

People can eat a wide variety of food that can be grown in other areas. As a result， people eat more food produced in other regions than local food. Do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages？人们可以吃到很多其他地区的食物，这导致了人们购*更多进口水果而非本地食物。你认为这是利大于弊的事吗？

雅思写作真题范文

Our diet is becoming more diversified than before， with a wider range of food transported from other regions and served on the dining table. Many people prefer this kind of food to locally produced food and this phenomenon has both positive and negative outcomes.

More choices in the daily diet indicate that people nowadays enjoy better quality of life. For instance， people in China can buy some bread and biscuits that are imported from foreign countries. Those who live in cold areas can try some fruits that are grown in the tropical area. Also， this明 encourage the trade between different regions， as any country or region can focus on the production of the local food and exchange it with others. As a result， the productivity increases significantly and people can buy high quality food at low prices.

However， this trend also has some negative effects， both on individuals and on society. Food produced locally is believed to be fresher than that transported a long distance from other regions. To extend the shelf life， preservatives are commonly used in food processing， posing a risk to people＇s health， as these additives usually contain harmful substances. In addition， the food of a region reflects its customs and cultures. If people follow the trend to eat the imported food， some local special food may diminish， which would be a loss of local food culture.

Overall， in a globalized era， we can expect more food produced in other areas to appear on local people＇s dining table. This can improve our living standard， but meanwhile there are some problems that should not be ignored. （269 words）