雅思复习资料9复习资料+解析-Test2写作task2

上海写作规划师点题：

这个题目是2008, 2009和2021年多次出现的旧题，属于argumentation的立论型题，具体而言，题目的要求To what extent do you agree or disagree?属于传统的表达砚点或对现象发表看法并进行论证的形式。注意在论证中要给出你赞成或反对的原因.并以适当的拓展支持自己的观点。

雅思写作范文：

As a vital component of high school education, community service should always be a part of whole educational system. Thus, some advocate that the community service should add to the compulsory agenda. Personally, I couldn't agree more.
Admittedly, unpaid jobs for charity organizations take up some time of students who need to spend more valuable time on their study. Namely, in a short term, this activity can't bring any reward for those participants. However, people should never judge some activities with a short-sighted view; instead, long-sighted perspective becomes more reasonable and *arter. With sufficient social experiences and working skills, students may be more competitive in the job market after graduation in the foreseeable future.
Obviously, establishing community service as a compulsory part in high school education is not only helpful for students but also meaningful for the whole society. Firstly, both text-based and society-based methods make up the whole structure of the high school education. The community service perfectly combines both parts in order to accomplish a better outcome for those students, because they have the opportunity to put their newly-learnt theories into practice. Secondly, throughout these charitable activities, students can understand those disabled people better, so they will pay more attention to these special groups in their daily life. More importantly, it will shape their strong and independent personality gradually. Namely, offering helps to others teaches the young to understand and support each other in the community.
In sum, it is a must to add community service to the compulsory education, especially in high schools. I strongly recommend the government and some organizations involved take the advice into consideration.

结构分析：

此范文根据题目的要求相应地分为四段，段介绍题目背景并表明个人立场：二段通过让步图说明社区服务的不足，终进行反驳；三段介绍社区服务的两个必要性，也就是好处，从而进一步肯定自己的立场；四段作为结尾，归纳总结自己的观点并提出自己的期许。

亮点词汇：

段： Vital 重要的，关键的 Component 成分，组成部分	二段： Admittedly 诚然，无可否认 Short-sighted 目光短浅的，无远见的 Long-sighted 目光长远的，有远见的 Competitive 有竞争力的
三段： Establish 设立，建立 Meaningful 有意义的 Make up 组成，构成 Accomplish 完成，达到	四段 Recommend 建议，推荐 Take..into consideration 把…考虑进去

亮点语句：

1. With sufficient social experiences and working skills, students may be more competitive in the job market after graduation in the foreseeable future
拥有充足的社会经历和工作技能.学生将来毕业后在就业市场可能更加有竞争力。
2. Obviously, establishing community service as a compulsory part in high school education is not only helpful for students but also meaningful for the whole society.
显然，在高中教育阶段将社区服务作为必修课不仅对于学生有益，而且对整个社会都是有意义的。