2021年1月18日雅思写作复习资料及思路分析

上海陈斌老师为大带来2021年01月18日雅思写作复习资料及思路分析。

Task 1 （小作文）
小作文： 曲线图+柱状图: the line chart shows average price of tickets at a theatre and the bar chart shows average percentage of tickets sold from 2021 to 2021.

题目解释： 从2021年到2021年间，某剧院的平均票价和平均*出票数比例的变化图。
要点分析： 这次小作文写作比较简单，基本上是课堂上所讲解的基本图形。题目之简单，数据量之少为近几年之啊！感觉18号考的考生攒够了人品。写作这次是闭着眼睛都拿8分的节奏啊。线图居然就一条线！柱图就只有八个柱，天佑烤鸭啊！
幅图简单，可以用3—4句话解决战斗，先来一句overview告诉考官，这个票价在两年中稳步有升，the prices of ticket at this theatre has showed an upward trend over the two-year period, though there were some *all waves within this trend.
然后按时间顺序具体详细地说明图表的特征。特别是10年二季度和三季度的剧烈变化。This level has not fluctuated until the second season when there had arisen a staggeringly sharp increase with price at 10.25 pounds and this continued to stay high till the rest of the year and further to the next except for a little fluctuation to 10.20 pounds.
然后描述柱图。柱图先说一下，每年的票务情况都比较类似，都是上半年苦逼经营，木有人看，直到年末圣诞来临开始火爆，观众爆满。Similar trend of tickets sold has emerged in both the two years. A little over half of seats have been occupied in the first three seasons in 2021 while in the forth even a ticket was unavailable. This situation has occurred again during 2021 but it seemed to be more in recession except for the end of the year.


u Task 2 （大作文）
复习资料 ： Many children find it is difficult to concentrate or pay attention at school. What are the causes and the possible solutions to this problem?
题型： report
类别： 教育类话题
题目解释： 许多小孩在上课的时候难以集中注意力。是什么原因导致这种问题，又如何去解决这种问题？
题目分析： 这次大作文考又回归了小孩的话题。儿童教育是雅思写作的重中之重。这种类型的考题难度不大，主要把握教育的目的，教育的方式，儿童的特点这几项就可以轻松突破。
分段解析：
1. Introduction
Report 段写作简洁明快，不要拖泥带水，繁复缛节，因为它的任务不多，提出现象，并给出过渡即可。Attendance are in request for preliminary study in most of countries while, unfortunately, many kids have difficulties in focusing themselves on class. Thereinafter, I will present several reasons and solutions to this.
2. body 1
个理由可以提及教室的噪音。很多教室有许多的噪声，比如，桌椅、走路声，讲话声等等导致其中一些小学生很难集中注意力在上课的老师身上，他们会轻易地被外界的响声所干扰。二，课程的难易程度和兴趣关注度都有可能导致儿童很难集中注意力。
Modern teaching practices, the organization of desks in the classroom, poor classroom acoustics, and mechanical means of ventilation all contribute to the number of children unable to comprehend the teacher’s voice.
关键词：preliminary/ acoustics/ distraction/ mechanical/
3. body2
解决方法可以是减少教室噪音，通过使用凹凸的吸音墙壁和橡胶桌脚，给老师配备良好的扩音设备等。二，培养学生对课堂内容的兴趣，可以通过提高课堂趣味性，互动性的方式来解决。
This problem could be tackled by some feasible methods such as set up system of sound absorption by furnishing the wall with special material for absorbing sound and add rubbers on the table leg and equip teachers with high-qualified audio devices.

关键词句推荐： sound absorption/ high-qualified/
4. Conclusion
结尾呼吁学校解决这个问题。
For a successful education, the learning environment is vitally significant, so any effort to improve this is likely to be of great benefit to all children.

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