浅谈雅思大作文讨论型题目

雅思大作文讨论型题目属于比较常见的一种写作类型。虽然常见，但是考生还是容易在这类写作上栽跟头。那么如何拿到写作基础分，不至于偏题或者不符合考官要求？下面，就和小编一起先来看几个例子：

Nowadays ,celebrities increasingly have the status of role models ,in particular for younger people．

Do you see this as a positive or negative development?

More and more prisons are being built to house the world's criminals and many people believe long-term imprisonment is the answer to solving the crime problem. However, others feel that medical and psychological assistance is what is required.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

这两题就是典型的讨论问题性。这类题目有一个共性，那就是一定是经过讨论，让考生给出自己的意见。

比如题，就是先提出一个问题：现在名人对于年轻人起到了越来越重要的模范作用，然后问考生观点：你认为这是正面的发展还是负面效应？这就需要考生进行分析、论述，给出自己的观点并说明理由。

又如二题：大背景是越来越多的监狱被建造用来收押凡人。然后给出正反两个截然不同的观点：有的人认为长期监管才是对于解决犯罪问题有效的措施，而有的人却认为应该给与那些罪犯医疗或者心理救助。后问考生对于这两种观点的看法，给出自己的意见。

下面来看一位雅思写作考6.5分的同学写的雅思讨论型作文，应该来说，基础不错，写从句没有问题。这位同学的目标是，写作想上7分。

先看看学生雅思讨论型作文范文：

There is a growing consensus that the administrations as well as some industrial companies have the obligation and capacity to protect and promote our living surroundings. More specifically,most economic achievements have been obtained at the cost of the environmental pollution and the scarcity of resources of local areas. Besides, the governments are blessed with sound budget and legal system so that the detailed arrangement cannot be a bother. And this position claims that international cooperation is significantly important to this situation and only by joint effort can pool enough investment and labor force.

However, it is contended by some critics that, to some extent, personal actions are superior to other efforts in dealing with this disturbing problem. In details, the whole perfect plan may turn out to be an empty sheet if the residents do not obey the orders and even keep worsening the environment. So this argument goes on that, it is the individuals’ actions, indeed, that put all theories into practice. So under this circumstance, person should and must play an irreplaceable role in this issue.

雅思大作文讨论型题目具体问题如下：

1，典型的传话筒文章。中间两段没有自己的态度。换句话说，虽然考官写的文章在中间段客观，但是也能看出自己对双方的态度。而这位同学写的完全看不出来。

2，中间段拓展方式不对。没有将一个观点完全展开，而且用了more specifically, in details这些车轱辘话。

3，套句明显：this position claims, so this argument goes on。

4，逻辑方面的连贯不好。关于逻辑方面，我的具体点评如下：

比如，There is a growing consensus that the administrations as well as some industrial companies have the obligation and capacity to protect and promote our living surroundings(论点：企业和*有责任计划护环境). More specifically,most economic achievements have been obtained at the cost of the environmental pollution and the scarcity of resources of local areas.(具体地说，他们经济方面的成功是以环境为代价。)Besides，。。。。。。。。。(按照前面两句所说，那么三句话就应该是：因此企业不能为了经济利益而破坏环境。相反，他们应该.....)但是，从besides开始TA又重新引入了一个新的论点。给人感觉就是一个都没说清楚，又弄另一个去了。

后，提醒考生一定要注意，讨论完之后一定要有自己的主张，切不可就事论事，没有观点。雅思大作文讨论型题目大的特点就是题目中本来没有观点，观点就是你自己的观点。既要讨论又要给观点，少了任意一个都不可以。