雅思口语范文解析：第一部手机

口语题目

Describe the time when you received your first cellphone.
You should say:
when it was
where you were
who gave you the cellphone
what it was like
and explain how you felt about it.

范文解析

这个题目要求考生描述你收到第一部*的情景。在回答中，你需要说出时间、地点、送你*的人是谁、*是什么样子的以及你对这部*的感受。这个题目，除了要注意时态的准确性，还建议同学们加入一些故事情节，毕竟单纯描述物品有点单调，而且并不一定能答满要求的时长。

中文大纲

描述对象：摩托罗拉*
关于*：*的外观，赠予*的人物和地点，拥有这部*后的小插曲
感受：对这部*的喜好程度

范文

I received my first cell phone when I was in high school. It was a birthday gift from my father. It was a Motorola, and I liked it very much.

It was dark green and it was the early old-fashioned slide phone. So it was absolutely not fancy compared to what we have today, but it was definitely the coolest back then. I still remember one time when my phone rang in class. I was very embarrassed and nervous, and I thought my teacher would be mad and call my parents. but she didn’t. She just warned me and told me to put my toy away, because she didn’t expect it was a phone. Anyways, most people used beepers in those years.

I liked this phone very much because it was a gift from my father, for one thing. For another, it made me feel proud among my clas*ates. Most importantly, it was something that I could keep in touch with my family and friends during those years.

重点表达

old-fashioned a. 过时的
slide phone 滑盖*
put away 收起来