A visit to the carnival
You should say:
When did you visit it?
Describe the good things about the carnival?
How could have the carnival been made better?
Actually I was asked to organize a school carnival last week. I think I would be able to talk a lot on this subject. I was asked to make all the arrangements for the school carnival. As you know the carnival is held every year before the lent and most of the schools celebrate it as a very important event.
事实上,上周我被要求组织一次学校嘉年华会。我想我能就这个问题谈很多。我被要求为学校的狂欢节做所有的安排。正如你所知,狂欢节每年在四旬斋前举行,大多数学校都把它作为一个非常重要的活动来庆祝。
First of all I had to seek help of some volunteers, I asked my cousins to help me out and they agreed to help. It was a carnival for the children so I had to get the things which would be of interest to the children. I contacted the magician and asked him to show his tricks at carnival. This thing was very interesting for the students. Another thing which was of interest to the students was that the theme of the carnival was Hollywood and all the children were dressed up as their favorite Hollywood start.
首先,我必须寻求一些志愿者的帮助,我请我的表兄妹帮助我,他们同意帮助我。这是一个孩子们的狂欢节,所以我必须得到那些孩子们感兴趣的东西。我联系了魔术师,让他在狂欢节上表演魔术。这件事对学生来说很有趣。另一件学生感兴趣的事情是,狂欢节的主题是好莱坞,所有的孩子都打扮成他们最喜欢的好莱坞开始。
I regret one decision which I made during the organization of the carnival. The carnival would have also acted as a fund raiser if I could have sold some tickets.
我很后悔在组织嘉年华时做的一个决定。如果我能*出一些门票的话,狂欢节还会充当一个募捐者的角色。