雅思写作中议论文的个性化表达

雅思考的作文是重中之重，如何把自己的作文写得脱颖而出，写得让考官一眼就认为你的作文是一篇与众不同，具有个性化，让人耳目一新而又不偏题的好作文呢？在不同的文章结构中有不同表达方式。有很多考生认为，议论文是就辩论式的文章，需要用科学严谨的语言和观点来紧扣主题和论证自己的thesis。但是适度的添加一些个人经历，并不会偏离文章的初衷，可是如果过多的添加个人经历又会导致以论文写得像记叙文。适度的在议论文中添加一些个人经历或者个人喜好相关的描述，会使文章变得不会那么枯燥乏味，会让你的作文在千篇一律的说理文章中脱颖而出。

一：文章开头部分的表达：

虽说万事开头难，但是一个好的开始同时也是成功的一半。一个好的开头段落对整篇议论文的作用是很大，同时也至关重要的。曾经流传过阅卷老师批改一篇作文的时间有限，所以只会细看开头和结尾，中间部分仅仅一扫而过，看看几个关键点。当然不同的阅卷老师有不同的阅卷习惯，不过这恰恰说明了开头段落的重要性。如果大部分考生的开头都用”Nowadays,........”  , ”Recently,..........”  ‘  “According to ......”或者”With the development of.......”这种千篇一律的开头句子，而你实用一个很个性化的开头句子，那样会使你的作文一开始就给阅卷老师一个好印象。下面来看一个例子:
Being the only child.
个性化开头段
Being the only child in my family has had some negative effects on me and on my parents as well.
The Three Gorges Project Is Beneficial
个性化开头段（后一句）
The Three Gorges lie in the middle reaches of the Yangtze River.After years of investigation and research ,many scientists and engineers have suggested that to control the floods brought by the Yangtze River to its lower reaches,a large dam should be built there.But many other scientists and engineers disagree.Thus a heated debate has begun as to whether the project is beneficial.I am in favor of the project and believe that it will have more advantages than disadvantages.

二：文章主体部分的表达：

文章主体段是比较难以进行个性化表达的部分。因为主体段需要有几个小的points和facts来支持你的thesis statement.如果过多的使用个人经历，会造成文章的主观性太强，不能够比较strong的来support你的idea和thesis。
比如范文 The Control Of Death
What follows is a moral defense of euthanasia.Primarily,I mean active or positive euthanasia,which helps the patient to die;not merely the passive or negative form of euthanasia,which “let the patient go”by simply withholding life-preserving treatments.The plain fact is that negative euthanasia is already a an accomplished.an apparently irreversible,fact in modern medicine.Every day in a hundred hospitals across the land decisions are made clinically that the line has been crossed from prolonging genuinely human life to prolonging only subhuman dying.

三：文章结尾部分的表达

议论文的文章结尾部分的表达通常是对上文的总结概括，也通常是上文观点的总结重申。很多考生因为语言表达能力有限，所以总是匆忙结尾。如果在文章结尾中加入个性化的表达方式和表达思路，那么一定可以让文章出彩。
结尾部分强调不应该计划持沉默的重要性：
I have come out of my despair to tell you this.Remember I did not come from another place or another time.Others like me are all around you.Look at us with an angry heart,anger that will help you help me.Anger that will let you tell of me.The poor are always silent.Can you be silent too?
结尾强调知识和智慧的重要性：
I have said that in some degree wisdom can be taught.I think that this teaching should have a larger intellectual element than has been customary in what has been thought of as moral instruction.
在议论文中巧用个性化的语言和思路，可以使文章看起来没那么千篇一律，枯燥乏味，为文章增添色彩，别具一格。