2021年雅思写作难题分析：success in life

2021年雅思考已经20场过去了，的老师为考生总结了2021年出现的雅思写作难题，下面来看一下关于success in life的话题。
Some people think success in life is based on hard work and determination, but others think there are more important factors like money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
题目翻译：有些人认为生活的成功靠努力的工作和决心，而另外一些人认为金钱和长相更加重要。讨论双方观点并给出自己的观点。

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题材类别：双观点argument
话题类别：抽象类
建议结构：平衡式写法，先讨论双方观点，再给出个人观点

雅思写作思路：
Introduction ：大背景+小背景
大背景：写出现在人们对于到底哪些因素决定了人们的成功在展开热烈的讨论。
小背景：观点一：一些人认为通过决心和努力可以获得成功
观点二：一些人认为外貌和金钱在获得成功的道路上更为重要
好词好句：
认为： Think, believe, insist, maintain, assert, conclude, deem, hold, argue, be convinced, be firmly convinced, be fully convinced

二段：论述观点一 – 努力和决心
分论点：不可否认的是，努力和决心在某种程度上更大的影响了一个人是否能够成功。
举例论证：很多科学，如牛顿，爱迪生和居里夫人，通过不懈的努力，持之以恒，后获得了成功。
好词好句：
居里夫人：Mary Curie
爱迪生：Thomas Edison
名言：天才是百分之一的灵感加上百分之九十九的汗水(Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration),
……是设定目标和行动的动力：…… be a powerful impetus of setting up goals and action)
在无数次失败后得到：obtain ……after the countless trial and error
光有决心还不够，努力也是很重要的：without hard work，however，determination is in vain)。

三段：论述观点二 – 金钱和外表
写出金钱和外表在一定程度上影响人们的成功。
金钱：一些人出生有比较好的庭背景在事业开始阶段相对比较容易。
外表，一些年轻人有着比较好的外表可以有比较大的机会获得高薪工作，比如模特和演员，从而获得成功。
论证方法：
解释论证：说明为什么金钱重要
举例论证：说明那些工作的成功中外貌十分重要
反驳论证：证明只依赖与金钱和外貌是不够的
好词好句：
重要： Key, crucial, critical, important, significant, vital, substantial, indispensable, imperative
给与：Give, offer, render, impart, provide, supply, afford
优势：Advantage, merit, virtue, benefit, upside, strength
发展：Development, advance, progress
有益的：Useful, helpful, beneficial, profitable, rewarding， advantageous
筹款和投资：funds and investment
进军市场：crack to the market
雄厚的基础：lay solid foundation
企业需要资金来引进智能化的设备以及优化资源：The company needs to introduce intellectualized equipment and optimize resource
促进：stimulate，enhance，prompt
提高发展的速度并带来成功：speed up the development of companies and achieve success
对于工作在聚光灯下的特殊工作人群而言,如平面模特，外貌对于获得个人的成功而言也是不能轻易忽视的：For those who work under the sport light like the still model，the appearance cannot be easily neglected if these people desire to success。
对于金钱和外貌的过于依赖将会丧失努力的动力，仍以失败告终：If over rely on wealth and appearance， individuals would lose the incentive for hard work and determination, ending up being fruitless)。

结尾段：个人观点+总结

个人观点： 尽管金钱和外貌能让某一部分人起步更加容易，但过分的依赖而无视决心和努力是不可能会成功的。所以，成功在很大程度取决于一个人的决心有多坚定，所做的工作有多努力。
Despite that powerful background of money as well as attractive looks can help a certain number of people to succeed， it is unlikely that they achieve success if they ignore the significance of determination and hard work. Success depends on how firmly people hold on to their determination and how many efforts they put into their work.