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2021年10月25日
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Some people believe that job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others believe that people cannot always enjoy their jobs and that a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
此题属于双边讨论题型,话题分类属于社会生活类中的工作就业类。难度中等,由于双边题型本身设置了一定的难度系数,对于考生来说,能够拿到任务完成分也不是很容易的事。双边题型一定要特别注意两个观点之间的关系,在三种分类中此题属于各自交代具体方案内容的类型,在分析的时候可以从不同角度着手。主体段构思如下,观点一,有些人认为工作满意度更重要,原因主要是工作满意度会直接影响到工作热情和积性,这样能够更快更好的完整工作任务和职业理想。 观点二,但是也有人认为长久稳定的工作更重要,因为这对计划证人们的长期生活质量,对*的人信任度,维持社会稳定和行业发展,都有作用。在整合两个观点的时候,可以重点放在“两个观点并非背道而驰的,在一定的条件下,可以做到工作满意度和长期稳定的工作兼顾的情况” 。
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A job can provide people with various things including pay, perks, and reputation. But if one thinks about the significance or at very least the purpose of doing the job, he/she must really consider the relative importance between job satisfaction and job stability.
Some believe that the sense of satisfaction outweighs that of security in the workplace. The reason is that if people are satisfied with their job, they will naturally have more zest for what they do, and this can in turn motivate them to achieve better job performance. By comparison, although a high level of job security suggests that people can keep their jobs, those who value it more would have less incentive to work hard, and thus be less likely to reach comparable achievements.
However, I personally would agree with the view that jobs are not always enjoyable and a constant career bear more importance. For instance, if a product manager wants to succeed, he/she will have to study the varying preferences of consumers before launching any potentially popular product. A more convincing example is the scientists who identified the cycle of sunspot. He spent his entire life in an observatory tracking and recording the astronomical data. None of these works are pleasant things to do, but without such continuous painstaking work in an occupation, people will be unable to taste the thrill of success, and can even end up leading a fruitless life.
In conclusion, my own view is that job satisfaction is more important than job security, but to accomplish any meaningful goals, one must go through the repetition of endless boring works.
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