2021年10月24日雅思写作复习资料

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Some  people  say  that  playing  computer  games  is  bad  for  children  in  every  way.  Others  say  that  playing  computer  games  can  have  positive  effects  on  the  way  children  develop.

Discuss  both  views  and  give  your  opinion.

解析：

请注意，题目中如果含有discuss both views and give your opinion.按照评分标准，需要讨论双方观点以及给出自己观点。该类型需要考生将双方观点进行完全展开讨论，结尾段落一定要表明立场。否则，将会被判为do not address all parts of the question.

同时,该题目属于教育大类，同学们平时需要积累相关场景词汇和主题观点。

主题是computer games，正方提出电脑游戏对孩子各方面都有危害，是一个十分站不住的观点，很容易反驳。

提示：一旦在考场上发现 all, never, always, only,等过于对化的词，那么很难在逻辑上严密地证明其完全正确，而举出反例证明其漏洞则要好写很多。

反方认为，电脑游戏对孩子的成长有积影响，同样也很容易找到观点进行支持。

写作步骤：

Introduction，进行改写题目和立场表白。

Body 1：承认沉迷电脑游戏存在负面影响

①健康问题，比如久坐导致近视，肥胖，驼背

②心理问题，比如孩子变得孤僻，不愿意和现实社会打交道

Body2：阐述电脑游戏存在很多好处

①益智类游戏，激发孩子想象力，决心。

②体育类游戏，培养孩子团队精神

Conclusion；此段落进行观点总结和笔者看法的提出。

先得承认，过度迷恋游戏的危害，其次强调利大于弊。同时提出，只要监护人提供监管和帮助，孩子们可以从游戏中获得很大好处。

Computer games have been criticized as electronic * for a long time. Some people, however, suggest that electronic games facilitate growth of youngsters in some aspects. Personally, I believe video games bring more advantages than disadvantages.

It is undeniable that addiction to computer games is detrimental to teenagers both physically and mentally. Unlike *s, children normally lacks self-control when facing appealing stuff. Spending too much time on computer games, they are likely to suffer from some health problems, such as poor sight and obesity. Also, emotional tie may be aggravated to a certain extent, since they prefer to play electronic games rather than stay with family. In some cases, the young may become alienated and escape from real life.

However, computer games can provide a number of benefits to youth. Puzzles, for example, in which children need to follow instructions, solve complex problems and use logic. In this way, educational games enable them to learn and spark their imagination. Also, when playing such games, children can be equipped with determination, because those games usually cost a relatively long period of time to complete all the pictures. In addition, team spirit can be cultivated in some games. Take sports games for example, in order to win a football match, children need to coordinate every victual footballers on the pitch. Such experience will be beneficial for a child’s progression into an *.

In order to minimize these negative impacts, I believe, parents need to take certain countermeasures. First, they can limit the length of time that their children spend on games. Second, they should keep an eye on what kind of games their children play and make sure that their kids are not influenced by some violent or *ographic ones.

To conclude, I concede that addiction to computer games comes with undesirable side-effects. Nevertheless, it is rather one-side to deny the benefits. If there are proper guidance can be given from supervisors, children undoubtedly can benefit electronic games.

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