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2021年7月13日雅思大作文解析及范文

雅思A类大作文题目:
The tendency to copy is shown in the popularity of fashion in clothes and other consumers' goods.
衣服的流行以及其他消费品的普及体现的是复制的趋势。
To what extend do you agree or disagree.

题目分析 :

关键词:
1)The tendency to copy
2)Popularity of fashion in clothes and other consumer’s goods
思路:一波三折写法
理由一: the symbol of mixture of different culture , economic integration
理由二:a form of self-expression ,  the  presentation of personality ,mood and aesthetic appreciation
让步段 (理由):
1)plenty of manufactures to make more profits
2)certain groups without *yzing to purchase and imitate blindly.
转折 :
1)limited temporary  profits instead of the long-term and plentiful economic benefits .
2) consumers  to be more sensible levels to make the determined attempt to purchase
结论:  the irreversible tendency instead of imitating phenomenon


各段的内容 各段的写法
开头段 转述题目+表明立场 开头一段写四句话,即背景+转述主题+自己观点+(引起下文)
二段 理由段 理由段是文章的主体部分由两种写法:
1)              段落中心句+支持句
2)              段落中心句+支持句+例子
该段主要陈述自己支持的某种观点或好处,可以只有一个理由
三段 理由段
四段 让步段 该段由让步句+转折句构成。让步句承认某种观点的合理性,转折句对该观点加以反驳。
结尾段 总结全文+强调立场 该段先总结全文,然后进一步强调自己观点,或得出结论













范文:

段:
In current society especially in recent years, purchasing and chasing fashionable clothes and other consumer’s products emerging dramatically turns out to be common phenomenon of society. Some individuals deem it is the result of mutual imitating, however, as far as I am concerned that it is the inevitable tenor of globalization and economic integration and the Internet popularizing.

二段 : 不认同 ,理由一
To begin with, purchasing the popularity of fashionable clothes and other consumer’s products is the symbol of mixture of different culture, economic integration and advanced technology, to give rise to the lifestyle changing, which can be well explained by the following example. Take the eminent Mobile Phone Apple for example. It is widely accepted and applied by increasing prevalent number of people around the world especially for Chinese, due to its extraordinary function and humanized style of designing.

三段:不认同理由二
In addition, chasing the popularity of fashion clothing and other consumption goods is also a form of self-expression, the presentation of personality and aesthetic appreciation. Namely, a sizeable percentage of individuals tend to have more sense of identity toward the main fashionable tendency, which can be attributed to the powerful and potential influence of media and advertisement as well as the certain group who are living around.

四段:让步段
There is no denying that plenty of manufactures imitate other eminent band to make more profits, and the certain groups without *yzing and distinguishing purchase blindly. However, in terms of manufactures, imitating can merely obtain limited temporary  profits instead of the long-term and plentiful economic benefits . In terms of consumers, they will return to be more sensible levels to make the determined attempt to purchase more suitable and fashionable clothes and reasonable consumption goods according their financial situation.

结论:
On balance, taking into account the above perspectives, I am convinced that the popularity of fashion is the irreversible tendency brought about by advanced communication , soaring technology and the progress of economic and cultural integration instead of the so-called “tendency of copy”.

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