2021年6月21日雅思写作机经

2021年6月21日雅思考笔已经结束，傅雪芬老师和张彩彩老师亲临考场，为大带来史上全面的雅思考回忆。

（本次小作文为柱形图，难度较低。详情请参见慎浩老师的写作思路指导。）

A类小作文
图表类型：地图
作文题目：公园在十年前和十年后的对比图
作文图片：


A类大作文
作文题目：
An increasing number of people are changing their careers. What are the reasons? Do you think it is positive or negative for the society?
题型类别：原因解释类
题材类别：工作就业类
类似旧题：
10.06.19
An increasing number of people change their career and place of residence several times during their life time. Is this a positive or negative development?
07.01.06
The world of work is changing rapidly. Working conditions today are not the same as before and people no longer rely on taking one job for life. Discuss the possible causes for these changes and give your suggestions on how people should prepare for work in the future.
11.11.19
Some people think job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others think that people cannot expect to enjoy a job and having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
写作思路指导（来自慎浩老师）
2021 年 6 月 21 号雅思大作文 A 类思路解析 慎浩
An increasing number of people are changing their careers. What are the reasons? Do you think it is positive or negative for the society?
（近期考过相似题目：2021年1月11号 相似度：90%）
2021年1月11号雅思大作文 A类慎浩
Many young people in the workforce chanae their jobs or careers every few years. What are the reasons for this? Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages? (=306 words)
段：社会背景 + 原因 + 自己观点
社会背景： 年轻人更换职业为自己提是一种不同的发展方式以及行业的本身，以及社会的发展产生一定程度的影响。
句型：
A furnishes B with a different manner of developing and generates certain impacts on sth and sth.
原因： 原因归因于 1 自身的发展 2 更好的就业机会
句型：
such a phenomenon is ascribed to sth and sth
自己观点： 我认为更多的优势 / 劣势 体现在有利于 / 不利于 社会的发展
句型：I am convinced that more merits /demerits are embodied in favorable /unfavorable sth.

二段：论点 + 论据 + 例证 + 结论
论点： 换职业是职业规划的一部分
句型： doing sth may be part of sth
论据：在工作一段时间后——作出正确的职业选择——更加个性以及喜好
句型：Only after sth can * make advisable choices according to sth.
例证：很多年轻人在毕业以后并不了解什么样的职业适合他们，因此从事欠缺考虑的行业。
句型：A majority of * have no idea about sth ( what sort of job is suitable for them ) so to carry on sth that * take without cautious consideration
结论：从这个角度讲，跳槽是明智的选择
句型：From this point, doing sth is a correct choice.

三段： 论点 + 论据 + 例证
论点 ：年轻人换职业为了在其他公司更好的发展
句型：* do sth for N （better development in other companies 语法：adj +N +介宾结构）
论据：互联网呈现——很多的机会——使得年轻人——了解好的发展机会
句型：Conspicuously, sth are well presented and promoted on sth, making it possible for * to be constantly of sth Be presented and promoted by sth / on sth 由。。呈现或促进了。。。
Make it possible for * to do sth vt使得某人干某事 be constantly informed of sth 不断当地了解
例证：在一些工作的网站，例如51 ，不断更新的工作为年轻人以多种渠道提供了大量而可靠地就业信息，这是年轻人更换职业的一个很重要的因素。
句型：on some adj websites, sth are continuously upgraded to furnish * with plentiful and reliable information in diverse channel, which is a reliable information in diverse channel, which is a vital factor to cause * to do sth.

让步段：另一种观点的合理性+对此观点反驳
必须承认地，换职业对于社会有其不利的影响，例如，原有公司的人才外流，以及核心信息的人才外流，由此引发的不良竞争会对企业以及行业的发展照成不利的影响。
句型：Admittedly, doing sth has an unfavorable impact on society, such as sth and sth , which can evoke undesirable competition to sth and sth.
另一种观点：
与其对社会的消影响相比较而言有更多的积因素，因为1有利于人们通过不同的选择找到更适合发展的职业，从而提高生产效率为社会造更多的财富与价值。2有利于实现资源互补，优胜劣汰，从而初进行业的良性健康的发展。
句型：people’s such practice has more optimistic factors toward society in comparison with its demerits. Because it is favorable for * to do sth , to do sth, and to do sth. Besides, it is also conducive to do sth, to do sth and to do sth.

结论段：总结观点
总结观点：人们的职业规划以及更好的发展机会是换职业的根源，由此同时，这一现象对于社会也有更多的积影响。
句型：in brief, sth and sth are the root cause to sth. Meanwhile, such a situation has more optimistic influences to sth.


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