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吉林雅思柱状图范文:不同年龄段人民的消费占比

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吉林雅思柱状图范文:不同年龄段人民的消费占比

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  【图形分类】

  柱状图

  【题目解析】

  柱状图根据不同年龄段分别描述了花销分配情况。数据描述过程中要注意除了对比在同一个年龄段内部不同类别花销的情况,还要注意描述不同年龄段分配花销的差异。

  【写作思路】

  根据以上整理的信息,我们可以如下来布局全文:

  开头段:转述题目;

  主体段:依次描述每个年龄段内部不同类别花销的分布情况,其中除65岁以上年龄组之外,花销都更多被分配在购*衣物方面;

  总结:总体来说,随年龄增长,对于假日和衣服的花销越来越大而对于电子产品的花销越来越少;

  注意:

  1)描写不同年龄段内部各类别花销的分布情况时需要注意过渡;

  2)建议通过多种句式和表达的灵活应用来处理数据描述和数据对比。

  【参考范文】

  The bar chart compares the distribution of expenditures on three diverse items in terms of five age groups in one specific nation in 2009.

  According to the chart, people in most of the age brackets allocated higher proportion of budget on clothes compared with the other two categories. To be specific, people aged under 25 provided 11% of cost for clothes, followed by 9% for electronic products and merely 6% for holiday. Similarly, as for people in the age group of 26-34, the expenditure on clothes still occupied the largest proportion, at up to 13% while the figure for holiday was slightly higher than that for electronic products. The similar cost pattern could be seen for the age group of 35-44 and 45-64, among which the latter showed the largest percentage of cost on clothes among all the age categories, reaching as much as 17%.

  By contrast, people who were 65 years old and over would like to spend more on holiday, with 17% of budget allocated to this item, relatively higher than any other age group. 6% of cost belonged to clothes and only 4% of spending was for electronic products, placed last.

  Overall, the proportions of expenditure on holiday and clothes generally increased with age while the share of cost on electronic products showed a downward trend.

  (219 words)

  【语言积累】

  1.distribution (n.) 分布

  2.expenditure (n.) 花费

  3.diverse (adj.) 不同的

  4.bracket (n.) 范围

  5.allocate (v.) 分配

  6.category (n.) 分类

  7.merely (adv.) 仅仅

  8.slightly (adv.) 轻微地

  9.pattern (n.) 模式

  10.relatively (adv.) 相对地


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